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Florian ARGAUD

Florian ARGAUD

@icesofty

JavaScript full-time dev. I like to create Side Projects like : justmandala.com #3 Product of the day and github.com/icesofty/toko
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Joined November 2020
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Hey @polluterofminds ! :)

Some fonts are too light
I don't think the first images (a girl reading a book) are relevant to your product
Your Process is not corectly displayed on mobiledevices
Maybe you should add more informations? Is it free? Some examples?

I don't know how I missed these comments! Thank you so much for the reply. I'll be sure to address the font weights. Totally agree on the images. I'm definitely replacing those with mockups of the app itself soon.

So.. are you SURE it requires coding?
They're No Code for absolutely everything today.
Web App => Bubble and WebFlow
Phone App => BravoStudio
etc ...

If you want to validate your idea first, create a Typeform or just the Landing Page maybe. If you can make some pre-orders, use the money to pay someone to code it for you?

You have a lot

of blank spaces

in your post

it's quite hard to read 😂

So, some things I want to point on your Landing Page :
- The colors: the gradient effect is cool, BUT you are using too much of them! Choose one main gradient, and stick to it.
- The font size and color: It's complicated to read the text because the font size is too small and white with a light gradient... tough to read
- It's not great for accessibility and your SEO!
- Too many blank spaces! The first section is great, but then the other sections have way too much blank space. It makes me scroll and scroll and scroll... put all your pieces of information in a single section.
- You have a get in touch form + an email link just under the form. Choose the form OR the email link (I prefer email link, nobody likes forms)
- Don't forget to add a favicon 😊

Hey @ryanpwaldon,

First congratulations! Sounds like a really nice app for SHopify. I always wantred to try creating a Shopify app, but never tooke the time.

  • Anyway, yeah I understand what your app does : it give you offers in relations with the current article you have in your shopping list.

  • From a shopper perspective, yeah can be usefull!

    • Really love your Landing Page and all the gifs!

Thanks Florian!

If you're ever looking to get started with Shopify app dev, I recommend building and launching a very simple (no expectations) app that includes the basics (shopify paid plans, managing shop accounts, the app store review process, etc).

You'll learn a lot along the way – in particular, the possibilities / limitations of the Shopify APIs, app submission process, etc – and more importantly, you'll probably end up saving some time (I would have) 😁

Anyway, glad you like it, and very happy to see you understand it clearly 😊

Hey, really nice intro @Bjornftw 👋

Would love to hear your story! Looks like you are a globe trotter, you have a job that requires some travel?

Love the design of your app! But Google Maps don't make the same thing? 🤔 Really curious about your competitors!

In 2018 I did freelance design/web stuff and YTCount was my job.

The credit card feature in Google Maps is boring, so I decide to make it my own haha.

Great idea Kai! I just limited the spot lefts for all pre-orders on Gumroad, will update the Landing Page as well

Hey @david !

So, did you launch your product on other plateforms??

I have some technical limitations I've become aware of and am trying to fix first 😅

Updated the Landing Page. Some minor bugs and Font issue.

Ho... and I just made my first pre-sale! 🥳