I have multiple email accounts and domains, and I've come to like Spark; Using the free tier, and using its mobile app and MacOS variant.

It has one login that will give you access to all inboxes, maps etc. Also nice and easy switching between "regular viewing" and "smart views" that show your mail more organized.

Snoozing mails and planning mail sending is also very nice (send stuff in the morning to prevent people from thinking you respond at evenings also).

Main KPI's (like MMR, verified accounts, active users,..), referral codes? ad space sales ?

Visualisation looks kinda cool. I find the logo somewhat aggressive (looks military to me at first glance). Lot of info; I used Gemini to help me figure out what it does:

prompt:
can you ELIF this product: m0ve.app/
answer:
Imagine a website that makes planning events of any size super easy. This is Move. Instead of complicated tools, Move lets you create an event page, invite people, sell tickets (if needed), and manage everything in one place. It's like having a super-organized assistant for your next party, workshop, or even family reunion!

prompt2:
what are the core features of the product and what kind of product is it?
answer2:
Move is an event management platform. Here are its core features:

Create event pages:
Design a page with details about your event, like description, schedule, and location.
Manage invitations: Easily invite people and track who has RSVP'd.
Sell tickets (optional): If your event has a cost, Move lets you sell tickets and manage payments.
Centralized organization: Keep track of everything related to your event in one place.
Overall, Move helps you streamline the event planning process, from inviting guests to managing tickets.

If this is not aligned with what you want it to be, change your copy. IMO: I found the answers more satisfactory than the info on the page (which makes me think your product does more than "one thing". My $0.02: Either make different landings if there are multi aspects or break them down in shorter copy

When you write the helpful evergreen content that @marc indicates, you can also share that on Reddit. Reddit is relentless and does often brutally remove any self-promoting/promotional content.
Helping people there and setting your product in your profile is okay.

Then again; I think the effort on SEO is "less quick" but a better way to go. Start today and be consistent at writing content. As soon as your content is "known" by the SEO machines you'll see traction grow :)

Use it as a "solid pillar" in your marketing mix and try other things besides that.

If those don't show people where to sign up, I'm not sure what will 😅

Very nice @Baadier! Clear language, CTA button which shows why I should sign up. It shows the value your service gives me.

I think this is a neat version 👌🏻

The new design looks more clean and too the point. IMHO that's more in line with the value your solution provides : les bs more time saved to focus on finding your next living place.

The live site has a lot of redundant text, especially mentioning "all in one place" multiple times. And variations on that.

Cut those thinga down to the value that the features provide: centralized notes on properties, easy reviewing and debating with your partner, etc.

Regarding the new design:.
- state a call to action instead of the email buttons current text
- the with / without points will look easier I'd they're closer side by side
- it's unclear if you're integrating property listing websites that are listed as logos or if I can add references to properties on whatever site
- focus on showing value; how you save me time, prevent stress by improving communication / the experience, etc. That way I don't have to translate your features into those benefits in my head.
- do I need to pay a subscription or onetime fee? I'll probably need this app for a fixed period and then I'll be done for years to come.
- what steps would need to be taken on a high level when I start using Jonga? Ie: decide what's important and setup a checklist for that, then view properties and.. Etc

Hope this helps you to set the right tone and get the copy going for your target audience 💪🏻🤙

Thanks for your feedback Helene. You're right. Since I wasn't allowed I had to put the link somewhere, going in depth about why It wasn't given green light by Apple. I like the coming soon notification and the email collection idea, will go and change this.

Thanks for taking a look and giving me your tips 🙌🏻

Damn you @pretzelhands, why make it so hard to get us roasting.

Pros:
- You have the CTA right there when the site opens
- The site looks clean and loads fast
- The features are clear

Cons:
- I see the "Get Notebag" button in screen twice (one in the top bar and one under your taglines, might want to make the one under tagline look different (maybe even wiggle or such?) so it doesn't look like I'm seeing double instantly :p
- You state the app as: "Notebag is a fully keyboard-compatible note-taking app that links all your knowledge and gets out of your way"
The real VALUE that it will bring is that it will get out of your way. You might wanna focus more on the value - that seems like time-saving to me - that it provides, ie:

"Notebag lets you take notes faster than any other note-taking app using features like full keyboard compatibility, global show/hide shortcut, instant note creation, and hashtag based notes linking"
I'm not good at copywriting, but you get the gist.

• might wanna have the header float along with the reader so the Get Notebag button and FAQ are always in display

I really had to squeeze to get some remarks on this :) take care! 🔥

-ROAST-
My first 30 second thoughts:
- wow, you can find them out of thin air? Who are you, Hans Klok the magician?
- Use the machine to find prospects? I want to read you either work your ass off for me or have an automated solution with the stats to prove one of them will get me x prospects in a month
- No pricing? I would not going in when I don't get an indication of what it would cost to get the gains from your services... That feels like obligating myself to a blank contract. No way, Jose.
- Ow, and the visuals? I love the guy in the mountains and all the freedom it expresses, but then I get trapped into city life again?.

-/ROAST-

Think of how you want the reader to feel, check how you can show them what they'll be in for (what gains are there) and how much it might cost them ( or how they payment structure is setup).
And tell them straight out what value you provide and how that works.

All the best with your services! ✌🏻