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Edwin Klesman

Edwin Klesman
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@eekayonline

Owner www.eekayonline.com | part-time team lead, part-time EEKAY ONLINE | maker (🚧 www.linqmeup.com) | apps | SaaS | cross-platform | mobiledev
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Damn you @pretzelhands, why make it so hard to get us roasting.

Pros:
- You have the CTA right there when the site opens
- The site looks clean and loads fast
- The features are clear

Cons:
- I see the "Get Notebag" button in screen twice (one in the top bar and one under your taglines, might want to make the one under tagline look different (maybe even wiggle or such?) so it doesn't look like I'm seeing double instantly :p
- You state the app as: "Notebag is a fully keyboard-compatible note-taking app that links all your knowledge and gets out of your way"
The real VALUE that it will bring is that it will get out of your way. You might wanna focus more on the value - that seems like time-saving to me - that it provides, ie:

"Notebag lets you take notes faster than any other note-taking app using features like full keyboard compatibility, global show/hide shortcut, instant note creation, and hashtag based notes linking"
I'm not good at copywriting, but you get the gist.

  • might wanna have the header float along with the reader so the Get Notebag button and FAQ are always in display

I really had to squeeze to get some remarks on this :) take care! 🔥

This is great! Thanks for the advice with the CTA and value prop. Like that intro you provided there is 👀

-ROAST-
My first 30 second thoughts:
- wow, you can find them out of thin air? Who are you, Hans Klok the magician?
- Use the machine to find prospects? I want to read you either work your ass off for me or have an automated solution with the stats to prove one of them will get me x prospects in a month
- No pricing? I would not going in when I don't get an indication of what it would cost to get the gains from your services... That feels like obligating myself to a blank contract. No way, Jose.
- Ow, and the visuals? I love the guy in the mountains and all the freedom it expresses, but then I get trapped into city life again?.

-/ROAST-

Think of how you want the reader to feel, check how you can show them what they'll be in for (what gains are there) and how much it might cost them ( or how they payment structure is setup).
And tell them straight out what value you provide and how that works.

All the best with your services! ✌🏻

Thank you Edwin, very helpful. Great that you like the guy on the mountain :) Pricing and specifics missing - I read you, am working hard to figure this out right now ;)

A definable deliverable: you enter data and get a file (image/data/...) as output. Or an overview or insight.

Undefinable deliverable: you fill in information or contact the owner and you get consultancy that will help you reach your goal(s)..

IMHO: .io if the site is about data/file interaction (providing info, getting something out of it) interaction.

.co if it is about a service where the service itself is the product and not a "upfront definable deliverable".

🤔 makes sense?

Could you give me an example of "upfront definable deliverable"? because I'm also considering .co, and I wonder if I should go with it.

A definable deliverable: you enter data and get a file (image/data/...) as output. Or an overview or insight.

Undefinable deliverable: you fill in information or contact the owner and you get consultancy that will help you reach your goal(s)..

Thanks for shedding some light on this for me (in plain English)🙌🏻 I'm looking into affiliate programs and for paid content like online courses, eBook etc. but I'll focus on some audience and traction first. Thanks again!

I tweeted Ray (@rwenderlich) from the Ray Wenderlich platform.. awesome content for noobs and profis.. Might have budget for such domain purchase