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Recently redesigned and slightly pivoted the product Move, to highlight some new core features and the overall vision of the product.
https://m0ve.app
https://m0ve.app
- The goal for the landing page is to feel light but provide depth into how the product works, mirroring the product itself.
- In this latest iteration, I aimed to reduce the amount of copy throughout the page, striving for a balance between informativeness and avoiding visitor exhaustion.
- General aesthetics are important; is the page visually on par with commercial products and deliver a great user experience?
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On first glance: way too much going on, moving. On second glance: what the heck does it do? It doesn't look bad, it's just way too much for me.
ty for the feedback!
Visualisation looks kinda cool. I find the logo somewhat aggressive (looks military to me at first glance). Lot of info; I used Gemini to help me figure out what it does:
prompt:
can you ELIF this product: m0ve.app/
answer:
Imagine a website that makes planning events of any size super easy. This is Move. Instead of complicated tools, Move lets you create an event page, invite people, sell tickets (if needed), and manage everything in one place. It's like having a super-organized assistant for your next party, workshop, or even family reunion!
prompt2:
what are the core features of the product and what kind of product is it?
answer2:
Move is an event management platform. Here are its core features:
Create event pages:
Design a page with details about your event, like description, schedule, and location.
Manage invitations: Easily invite people and track who has RSVP'd.
Sell tickets (optional): If your event has a cost, Move lets you sell tickets and manage payments.
Centralized organization: Keep track of everything related to your event in one place.
Overall, Move helps you streamline the event planning process, from inviting guests to managing tickets.
If this is not aligned with what you want it to be, change your copy. IMO: I found the answers more satisfactory than the info on the page (which makes me think your product does more than "one thing". My $0.02: Either make different landings if there are multi aspects or break them down in shorter copy
Love it, ty!