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Harry Dry

Harry Dry

@harrydry

last of the young and famous writers - marketingexamples.com
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Joined October 2017

Cheers Temirlan. Interesting one. Definately pros of both approaches. Will be sure to check out how you transition

Yep - I live what he does. He cba to grow a “proper“ business though.

I see the benefits.

But the downside is it might frustrates smaller, non influential makers and creates a hierarchy. I think there's a small risk involved.

One option is to just do it and not talk about it. That way you get the benefits without the costs ...

Haha yes I considered just doing it without mentioning it. That's what most people tend to do. But it just didn't feel right for WIP as we tend to be an open community.

tbh man it's a really solid page. Not much to say =>

1) The "try it yourself feature" is really really really awesome!
2) I love the discount. And Romainian independence day line. Really original.

couple of minor points:

1) Your worst section by far imo is the The Lightspeed Inspector / Copy Any element you want / Smart CSS section - text looks long. Shorten it. I just looked at it and thought, fuck reading that. looks long. Also to make it more readable, perhaps use bold + italics and increase line height ...

2) I'd pull social proof section up higher. Currently last section.

Hey Harry, thank you so much for the feedback!

Will make the text section shorter.
By the way, I tried to pull social proof section higher (this week, after I read your comment) and conversion dropped, not sure if it was exactly this but I prefer to back it!

Thanks again for the suggestions.

haha. awesome. im really looking forward to reading it.
there is a skill to subtraction.

the proudest thing i did with my book was boiling it to 21 pages.

i just finished "we are the nerd", book about reddit.
gonna go for kamal ravikant next!

also, ive read deep work and its really overrated.
good concept, but could have been boiled down to 20 pages (stay away)

Yeah I watched "Deep Work" video by Cal Newport which was pretty good but point duly noted.

I liked that about "Love Yourself Like Your Life Depends on It" that its just 68 pages & author says in the last line I could've wrote more words but it just satisfies my ego. Some people hated it was just 68 pages so gave it fewer stars lol 😂

haha. awesome. im really looking forward to reading it.
there is a skill to subtraction.

the proudest thing i did with my book was boiling it to 21 pages.