Link to roast (would prefer X comments for reach/engagement, but will take whatever feedback I can get wherever I can get it): https://twitter.com/ben_makes_stuff/status/1776684809206759494

I used to be really lazy with landing page design, but this time I put in 100% effort and really tried to make it look more professional than my past pages. I also dropped Carrd (which I was using prior) and built my own custom landing page in Astro/Vue which I think helped a lot.

What I already know I still have to add:
- Images of the product/demo footage
- Bio about myself and why I built this
- Links to YT, ProductHunt, Reddit when launch happens later this month
- Some kind of social proof (I am reaching out to people to see if they want a free test in exchange for a review that I can add to the homepage)

Let me know:
- If the problem and solution are both clear
- If my copy text is good, or it needs some work -- this is really the first time I put effort into the copy but I think it can still be improved possibly. I'm no copywriter.
- Any other concerns/questions

Thanks!