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Hi Cat! I really like your casual down to earth style of writing, that works personally well for me and makes it easier to reach out to you!
A few things I noticed:
1. For me names of the buttons are a bit confusing, e.g. I clicked "Get to the good stuff" hoping it would bring me to your offerings and I could learn more about it, but it led to your contact form. Same with "Tell me more". I think the names of the buttons are nice and engaging and would work well for people like me who are impatient and want to jump to the most interesting part immediately, but in my case, the expectation didn't meet the reality. I think you can play around with using buttons for navigation and making your page more interractive, and it probably needs more thought.
2. In the part called "Hereβs what strategic, story-based content can do for you:" I would suggest using shorter titles that are easy to skim through to decide if you want to read more on it, e.g. "Transforms your audience into a loyal community that stands with you because they believe in you and your product." is a bit too long for my taste and I felt like it's too much work to read and I am lazy so I just skipped the whole part.
3. I would maybe also make it more explicit what type of content do you offer, e.g. "blog posts, website copy writing". You can add a few simple cards with simple titles that mention the type of content, or just an easy-to-read bullet point list.
Hi Cat! I really like your casual down to earth style of writing, that works personally well for me and makes it easier to reach out to you!
A few things I noticed:
1. For me names of the buttons are a bit confusing, e.g. I clicked "Get to the good stuff" hoping it would bring me to your offerings and I could learn more about it, but it led to your contact form. Same with "Tell me more". I think the names of the buttons are nice and engaging and would work well for people like me who are impatient and want to jump to the most interesting part immediately, but in my case, the expectation didn't meet the reality. I think you can play around with using buttons for navigation and making your page more interractive, and it probably needs more thought.
2. In the part called "Hereβs what strategic, story-based content can do for you:" I would suggest using shorter titles that are easy to skim through to decide if you want to read more on it, e.g. "Transforms your audience into a loyal community that stands with you because they believe in you and your product." is a bit too long for my taste and I felt like it's too much work to read and I am lazy so I just skipped the whole part.
3. I would maybe also make it more explicit what type of content do you offer, e.g. "blog posts, website copy writing". You can add a few simple cards with simple titles that mention the type of content, or just an easy-to-read bullet point list.
What do you think?
Other than that I think it's a great start!