Thanks for that! I definitely need to polish

Thanks for pointing this out! Totally correct, I need to hone the message a little bit better.

Best of luck!

Good points! Thank you :)

On Android, so can't use the app itself. Idea seems solid. Lots to keep track of as a papa.

One thing I would say - in your marketing materials, you seem to focus on things that are rarely needed. For example, blood type, vaccinations, birthdays. It's not that they're not needed, just rarely so.

But day-to-day, week-to-week, I'd be more interested in helping in household banalities. Things that you list as "coming in next releases": shopping lists, chores, etc. For example my son plays football. His practices start at different times of different days of the week. He plays tournaments at different fields in the city. Just knowing that papa needs to pick up Little Johnny and take him directly to the field on Tuesdays and not Thursdays - including make sure he brings his boots and kit in his backpack - is a pain point, for sure.

This of course naturally also raises the ability of the mom being involved in this as well. Does it make sense to have a companion app then for moms? Or with such an app, does the dad become chief record keeper for these things instead? How do you plan to involve moms in all this?

Anyways less of a roast, more of I'm curious where you plan to take this in future.

I feel like this can be compared to buttondown.com, correct?

I think your landing page does very little to tell me why I should use your platform. You said in reply to @vdgvince that you are focusing on doing a few things well. But certainly that's not the settings page where you can see the DNS records you need to enter on your domain?

You're showing me some of the table stakes features (DKIM stuff, CSV import, etc) and doing very little to explain why yours are better than Buttondown or anyone else.

So sell me, the marketer/developer fatigued with a million email platforms, on your tool. How do you solve my problem? That's the point of this landing page after all. I expect you have DNS authentication records. I expect you have CSV import of contacts. I go to the changelog page on your site, and there's a bunch of more marketable features there - like the dashboard with stats, segments, fields, tags, etc. I don't get the impression on your homepage that you have these features and most people will simply not look there for them. They will assume you don't have them. Which sells your tool short.

Good idea to offer a demo on homepage. Communicates more effectively than any explanation of the features.

However, before one clicks "try demo", the image of the app is a bit confusing. It's not immediately clear what I'm looking at here. I get it's a screenshot of the app - but maybe a screenshot of a more clear moment in the UI. I see a bunch of confetti, some flags, a big button...a bit confusing.

One thing that could contribute to building more trust is an explanation for the methodology of how it works. Don't rely on just the demo to show this off! You could spend a little bit of space later on the site to mention how your app is based on some kind of academic linguistic research or something along those lines. It says "created by experts" - make me believe it in supporting copy below.

Finally, how does this work? It might seem self-evident to you that for example maybe the app uses AI to listen and critique pronunciation. But it's important to explain how it works. You call out competitor apps for being too complex but that kind of relies on knowing how those work to explain how yours works. Better to just explain yourself!

Good luck.

You should be able to use keyboard and touch events to navigate through. Another words, on mobile you should be able to swipe forward or back. On desktop, you should be able to use your keyboard keys to go navigate the quotes.

Other than that, the design appears clean and readable to me.

However, I think you could massage it a little bit. First, the quote doesn't feel very "quotey" (made up word just now). You could play with the font weight to produce more emphasis on the quote. After all, it's meant to be the primary focus of this page, right? Don't be afraid to make it heavier and stand out more.

Also the images are a bit strange, agree with @baldai. I think it could be worth it to use line drawn illustrations instead. That way, again, the focus goes back to the quotation itself.

Hope this helps!

Try out Simpleanalytics.io - made by @adriaanvanrossum

I've used Mixpanel. It works decently enough, and you can run raw queries written as pseudo map-reduce functions on the dataset yourself if you want. It also has a free tier which is nice.