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Danny Postma
As in an ugly, annoying, overused font? -> www.fontsquirrel.com/fonts/lo…
Thanks! Should have rephrased. Need a font that is like aloof, hipster etc. So I guess something sans-serif I guess.
Overal, super good content! Just tweet the design a little and you're there. Tips below
1) Decrease the size of your logo, takes a bit of time to load
2) Align your navigation to the right (people expect it there)
3) Your hero title and description are super to the point, well done!
4) Make your CTA button text black, bold and bigger.
5) Change the CTA text to something that a user will get. No clue what will happen with "Check me". Maybe: Keep me in check is clearer, or simple Signup now
6) Change How it works -> "The hardest part of working alone is sticking to your own plans." and the first sentence to "This is how it work....."
7) Why would I want someone to supervise me? After this part its get really boring. Play around with fonts, size and maybe add some images.
8) Add more padding to the gray background blocks. Make the breeeeaaath
9) Change the gray background, feels a little to juridical
10) Your FAQ is a bit chaotic. Do it a bit more like these examples -> www.landingfolio.com/componen…
11) Join the waiting list -> Be the first to try it out or something
Nice to receive landing page feedback from the guy of Landingfolio!
Here's my view on your points:
1- Noted.
2- True, navigation to the right is better.
3- Thanks! I've been thinking for hours about it, glad you liked it.
4- I get the bold and bigger part, but black? I chose the color since it matches the images (same as the people's clothes and in contrast with blue). Maybe if it was black and when hovering over it then it turns orange? Or did you mean the text in black while preserving the orange button?
5- Good one, I'd probably go for "Stick to the plan" or your "Keep me in check".
6- Noted!
7- Noted, I'll try to make it more interesting.
8- N o t e d , it needs to b r e a t h
9- Yep, true. Gray is boring.
10- Thanks for the FAQ examples!
11- I also like that, something like "Be the first one to try it" sounds more appealing.
Thanks a bunch, you made my day.