Roast the landing page for

The homepage started as a signup form and hasn't changed much. It's got a whole lot of text.... The hero illustration is from before the app was built. The actual screenshot is all boring grey and too detailed. Roasties?

I love domains!

Maker of WIP amongst other things.

What I like:

  • The Markets screenshot further down the page
  • The benefits/features with icons
  • Clear pricing

What I dislike:

  • The illustrative mockup on top doesn't provide much info. Might be better to move the real screenshot into that space
  • There's A LOT of text and there's not enough informational hierarchy guiding me to what's relevant to me personally
  • The sign up step feels high barrier because you ask a lot of info. I imagine you'd get higher conversions if you just add an email field on the homepage with a sign up button. You can ask me later to set a name/password/etc
  • The landing page looks complex/overwhelming (because there's so much text), which does a disservice to the app itself because it's quite straight forward
  • Don't tell me "it's a better way", tell me what is better. Will it save me time? Help me get more sales?
  • I'm missing testimonials and/or a personal touch from you as the maker
  • I'd love to see more screenshots
  • Don't be afraid to use more spaces, multiple pages, etc. Give the information some room. Maybe a couple of sections for each major feature (listing automation, hosted landing pages, future roadmap)

👋 Join WIP to participate