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Marcus, let me know what do you think of this small piece of copywriting

Hi Marcus,

I appreciate all feedbacks that you recently gave me. I'd like to see what you think of this one.

My company Trustbar is developing a decentralized cryptocurrency exchange and automated asset manager. For crypto traders, the trades are decentralized and secure, which means there's no need to deposit and/or withdraw from Trustbar. The swaps occur instantly with the token purchased returned to the traders wallet in the same transaction that the trader sends the token they are selling. The automated asset manager allows crypto holders to pool their crypto and earns fees whenever crypto traders trade. Crypto holders are also rewarded with the Trustbar token for pooling their crypto and providing liquidity to the exchange.


Can you say what it does and does the description make sense?

Any suggestion to the description would be welcome.

Thanks a lot!