The screenshot text and placements throw me. You mention "Perfect text placement" but it looks off to me. Might be the overlap between the "p" and the "W" but it doesn't sell me on the overall quality.

You might consider swapping the images so they flow from left to right which is amore natural "before (other products)" to "after (our product)" with possibly an arrow in between them or a visual clue, so people understand immediately understand it.

Good luck!