Hey, here are my first reactions
* It looks nice and clean
* I can't understand who's the target audience, writing is too vague
* The buttons "Learn More" and "Get Notified" are disturbing. I don't need a button to scroll down, and I'm not sure why I would want to get notified (about what?)
* The group feature needs to be buffed up: am I supposed to come with my own group? how will you help me find a group?
* The icons in the process shouldn't be so far apart, on a big screen it's difficult to read
* I want to see what the critiques look like, it's more interesting to showcase how we'll collaborate than it is to know that you can invite people
* "Join the waiting list and get updates on Perligo's launch progress." Would your audience be interested by some kind of tips (writing, making a good critique, whatever) and would you be able to provide them? Or are you sure that the launch progress is enough for your target audience?
For some reasons I don't get notified of responses, so I'm really sorry to have missed this for so long. Great feedback. I'll be updating and incorporating that into the next iteration. Really appreciate you taking the time!
Hey, here are my first reactions
* It looks nice and clean
* I can't understand who's the target audience, writing is too vague
* The buttons "Learn More" and "Get Notified" are disturbing. I don't need a button to scroll down, and I'm not sure why I would want to get notified (about what?)
* The group feature needs to be buffed up: am I supposed to come with my own group? how will you help me find a group?
* The icons in the process shouldn't be so far apart, on a big screen it's difficult to read
* I want to see what the critiques look like, it's more interesting to showcase how we'll collaborate than it is to know that you can invite people
* "Join the waiting list and get updates on Perligo's launch progress." Would your audience be interested by some kind of tips (writing, making a good critique, whatever) and would you be able to provide them? Or are you sure that the launch progress is enough for your target audience?
For some reasons I don't get notified of responses, so I'm really sorry to have missed this for so long. Great feedback. I'll be updating and incorporating that into the next iteration. Really appreciate you taking the time!