Roast my eBook page

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Hey everyone,

I'd appreciate some roast for the page: https://slowandsteadyblog.com/buying-a-house-netherlands.

This is a page for my eBook that I'm selling to my YouTube and blog audience with TA of expats (or sometimes locals) living in the Netherlands. It's a Guide to buying a house in the Netherlands.

It doesn't matter if you know anything about the topic; I'd be grateful for any general feedback, too.

Thanks!

Carl Poppa · Accepted Answer

the simplest way is the best way

Carl Poppa · Answer

for once i have no notes.

might be good offer book for free (limited people) to get some testimonials.

Charlie Revett · Answer

Nice page! Some general feedback:

- I'm not aware of normal pricing for eBooks but this seems expensive
- The demo video is good, I'd put it higher up the page
- You don't have a CTA to buy the book in the header of the page
- Add some reviews from readers

Good luck!

Dmitrii Pashutskii · Answer

Fantastic feedback, thanks! 

Yeah, I am still playing around with the price. I was planning to sell it as a package with a calculator, but you might be right; if the person wants just an eBook, it's quite a steep price to pay. Maybe I need to create two bundles: just a book and another with a calculator, future updates, etc.

Will add other things, thanks!

Dmitrii Pashutskii · Answer

Oh, that's nice to hear, thank you!

I already had some sales. Just thinking about how would I ask them for testimonials xD Maybe I'll just ask by email if they are willing to give them.

Josef Strzibny · Answer

1. Fix headline

> Achieve Success in Buying Your Home in the Netherlands

Long and clunky. Just say "Buy your home in the Netherlands as a foreigner"

2. Video could be visible above the fold

3. View sample could have smth like a PDF icon or some graphics

You can look at my Kamal Handbook or Test Driving Rails how I approach the preview image.

Good luck:)

Dmitrii Pashutskii · Answer

Oh, nice, thank you for the tips and example!

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