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Roast my current landing page so I can build a better one for PH

I'm getting ready for a Product Hunt launch and building a new landing page for the big day, would love some feedback on the current landing page to see what language works and what doesn't. Personally, I don't think the problem we are wanting to solve is clear and thus- makes it difficult to motivate users to want to sign up.

Let me know your thoughts,

entice.com

1 - Can you identify what problem Entice wants to solve?

2 - Is there a user-type you think would want this service (yourself, someone you know, etc.)

Plus any other ideas or critiques- 

Thanks! Roast away. 

Luke Woolley
@LukeWoolley

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Florian ARGAUD
@icesofty

1 - Can you identify what problem Entice wants to solve?
I think it's similar to influenswer.com/ by @damon ?

2 - Is there a user-type you think would want this service (yourself, someone you know, etc.)
Probably some people looking to invest in Crypto/stock markets maybe?

It's my own POV, but I think your Landing Page is too vague. There are no examples, and it's not very clear how to signup as an 'expert' or as a 'customer'

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Luke Woolley
@LukeWoolley

Thanks @icesofty ! I would agree on the vagueness- our buyer persona is the white collar class but it's reading too broad at the moment.

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Damon Chen
PRO
@damon

As Florian mentioned, the "professional network" is a too big name. Do you want to start it with a small niche, like a specific industry?

I would tell you it's hard to get those high-profile professionals/stars onboard. They already make lots of money, if they couldn't get the incentives from your platform, it would be hard to have them sticky.

But best of luck🙏 Hope you could find a niche to kick it off!

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Arnaud Joubay
@sowenjub

Some notes, unsorted:
* The logo is not retina-display
* On a 16" screen, your content is too small
* I'm not sure I understand. Do I need to create yet another social network profile? Does it mean I can only find customers from there? Or is your job to make it easy to get paid?
* How do you handle international taxes?
* For anything social, showing faces is important. I think it would be more powerful if you gave example of people who used entice for specific tasks with a verbatim
* What exactly do you make easy? For who? Compared to what? Is it the admin, finding customers, making sure you're paid, tracking your service, charging the right price…

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Frizky
@frizky

There is currently a lot of white space.
I would make the height of the first slide a bit smaller.
Maybe show a preview of the second slide, this is common with other SaaS websites (saaslandingpage.com/)
Added a screenshot with the edit I was talking about.

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