Clearer product delineation & more detailed descriptions
Straight to the point
Pricing in EUR (might change to USD, it's more dependent on which kind of clients I'd like to get)
Consolidated some of the offerings
Ideas for refinement:
- One thing I'm toying with is potentially trying to ditch calls from the offers altogether - at least, reduce the need for them as much as possible.
- An introduction video from me
Looks a lot better already! I still think it's a bit to much text, but maybe that's personal preference. Intro video is definitely a nice idea. Keep it up!
Interesting, in my view it's not very much text ha!
I'd like to dig in a bit more if you don't mind: I suppose the view on the amount of text content depends on the purpose of it in your and my view - do you suggest very minimal text to give it more of a "straight to the point" kind of vibe or something else? From my perspective I'm trying to keep it a bit light while still establishing some authority with the customer, and be clear on exactly what they're getting. So it's not exactly a heavy sales page but also not a one-click everything.
Here's my first revision: ns2024test2.carrd.co/
Ideas for refinement:
- One thing I'm toying with is potentially trying to ditch calls from the offers altogether - at least, reduce the need for them as much as possible.
- An introduction video from me
Looks a lot better already! I still think it's a bit to much text, but maybe that's personal preference. Intro video is definitely a nice idea. Keep it up!
Interesting, in my view it's not very much text ha!
I'd like to dig in a bit more if you don't mind: I suppose the view on the amount of text content depends on the purpose of it in your and my view - do you suggest very minimal text to give it more of a "straight to the point" kind of vibe or something else? From my perspective I'm trying to keep it a bit light while still establishing some authority with the customer, and be clear on exactly what they're getting. So it's not exactly a heavy sales page but also not a one-click everything.
Yes, I like the straightforward approach you have: Fixed-price, full-powered Laravel development. Keep that up I'd say.