That's an interesting idea. Incrementally building it up. But it would mean we no longer have a yearly reveal of everything you did. You probably wouldn't read all the previous months anymore, since you already did so before.
As for the language, I agree it was a bit too corporate. I actively worked on making it more informal, but I never quite got it where I wanted. I will need to experiment with some more approaches.
That's an interesting idea. Incrementally building it up. But it would mean we no longer have a yearly reveal of everything you did. You probably wouldn't read all the previous months anymore, since you already did so before.
As for the language, I agree it was a bit too corporate. I actively worked on making it more informal, but I never quite got it where I wanted. I will need to experiment with some more approaches.