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Starting each paragraph with 'I' can appear focused on you rather than proposing value to X company. Simple swaps to other words or even 'We' for your company might look better:
Your <COMMUNITY-NAME> has been doing incredible <TYPE-OF-CONTENT> on X - congrats on growing the community to over <MEMBER-COUNT> members!
There was crypto spam in your community that seems to have slid under your radar: <DIRECT-LINK-TO-SPAM-POST>
We have an automated solution for this. Are you interested in seeing how it works?