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brian lowery

"showcase everything you are and create" and all of the other variations you made don't explain what the product is in 2 seconds.

You should follow this advice:

Ivan Westerhof

This is great advice! @benno curious – how would you rewrite it with this in mind?

Benno Builder

Love it, thanks for sharing! 🙂

My current heading is:

Your Personal Page to:

Express and Monetize Your Creativity.

A Link in Bio that turns your creativity into an interactive experience through Widgets.

I feel like this is an improvement over "Showcase Everything You Are and Create", but still has a long way to go for sure.

"Your Personal Page to" -> Kicker: product category
"Express and Monetize Your Creativity." -> Headline: presents the product’s capabilities
"A Link in Bio that turns your creativity into an interactive experience through Widgets." -> Explain paragraph: describes key features that enable the product’s capabilities + benefits delivered

Am I on the right track?

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