You mean the header isn’t formatted correctly on your device? Does it look like the attached image?
Saku is about showcasing everything you are and create - whether it’s your work, adventures, or anything else that represents you. Maybe the wording isn’t super clear - appreciate the feedback!
If you're curious about the bigger vision, you can check out the Manifesto at saku.so/manifesto 🚀
I had the same. It reads a bit weirdly right now with the second line being
"You Are and Create"
Better would be,
"Showcase everything you are"
"and Create"
separate lines.
Maybe there's an even better way to do it but right now i was confused as well.
yeah for example. though right now first line is a lot longer so a bit unbalanced maybe?
depends also how tied you are to the current H1
maybe the "and Create" part is a bit vague / not really fitting.
I'm saying all of this as a person who just skimmed it without looking deeper into it (like most website visitors would do i think)
I never used any kind of these tools, so the tagline was also a bit confusing for me (i.e. I didn't know what the product was for judging from the tagline alone)
I'll give my humble vote to just "Showcase Everything You Create" – for me is shorter and more clear. The "You are" part reads a bit forced and vague.
The sub-headline could also be shorter, f.ex. "a place where your audience can connect with you through interactive widgets"
Disclaimer: I am not a marketer!
Other than that, the landing page looks good to me! Good luck!
Your Personal Page to:
Be Seen. Be Heard.
Be Creative. Be You.
Create a page where your audience can truly connect with your creativity through interactive Widgets.
I'm also no marketer by any means - figuring things out as I go. Really appreciate your input 🚀
Your Personal Page to:
Express and Monetize
Your Creativity
Create a page where your audience can truly connect with your creativity through interactive Widgets.
You mean the header isn’t formatted correctly on your device? Does it look like the attached image?
Saku is about showcasing everything you are and create - whether it’s your work, adventures, or anything else that represents you. Maybe the wording isn’t super clear - appreciate the feedback!
If you're curious about the bigger vision, you can check out the Manifesto at saku.so/manifesto 🚀
I had the same. It reads a bit weirdly right now with the second line being
"You Are and Create"
Better would be,
"Showcase everything you are"
"and Create"
separate lines.
Maybe there's an even better way to do it but right now i was confused as well.
otherwise site looks absolutely beautiful
Thanks for the feedback :)
You mean like this? Or am I missing something? 🚀
yeah for example. though right now first line is a lot longer so a bit unbalanced maybe?
depends also how tied you are to the current H1
maybe the "and Create" part is a bit vague / not really fitting.
I'm saying all of this as a person who just skimmed it without looking deeper into it (like most website visitors would do i think)
I never used any kind of these tools, so the tagline was also a bit confusing for me (i.e. I didn't know what the product was for judging from the tagline alone)
I'll give my humble vote to just "Showcase Everything You Create" – for me is shorter and more clear. The "You are" part reads a bit forced and vague.
The sub-headline could also be shorter, f.ex. "a place where your audience can connect with you through interactive widgets"
Disclaimer: I am not a marketer!
Other than that, the landing page looks good to me! Good luck!
Thanks for your feedback 🙂
What are your thoughts on this version:
Your Personal Page to:
Be Seen. Be Heard.
Be Creative. Be You.
Create a page where your audience can truly connect with your creativity through interactive Widgets.
I'm also no marketer by any means - figuring things out as I go. Really appreciate your input 🚀
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Your Personal Page to:
Express and Monetize
Your Creativity
Create a page where your audience can truly connect with your creativity through interactive Widgets.