yeah for example. though right now first line is a lot longer so a bit unbalanced maybe?
depends also how tied you are to the current H1
maybe the "and Create" part is a bit vague / not really fitting.
I'm saying all of this as a person who just skimmed it without looking deeper into it (like most website visitors would do i think)
I never used any kind of these tools, so the tagline was also a bit confusing for me (i.e. I didn't know what the product was for judging from the tagline alone)
I'll give my humble vote to just "Showcase Everything You Create" – for me is shorter and more clear. The "You are" part reads a bit forced and vague.
The sub-headline could also be shorter, f.ex. "a place where your audience can connect with you through interactive widgets"
Disclaimer: I am not a marketer!
Other than that, the landing page looks good to me! Good luck!
Your Personal Page to:
Be Seen. Be Heard.
Be Creative. Be You.
Create a page where your audience can truly connect with your creativity through interactive Widgets.
I'm also no marketer by any means - figuring things out as I go. Really appreciate your input 🚀
Your Personal Page to:
Express and Monetize
Your Creativity
Create a page where your audience can truly connect with your creativity through interactive Widgets.
Thanks for the feedback :)
You mean like this? Or am I missing something? 🚀
yeah for example. though right now first line is a lot longer so a bit unbalanced maybe?
depends also how tied you are to the current H1
maybe the "and Create" part is a bit vague / not really fitting.
I'm saying all of this as a person who just skimmed it without looking deeper into it (like most website visitors would do i think)
I never used any kind of these tools, so the tagline was also a bit confusing for me (i.e. I didn't know what the product was for judging from the tagline alone)
I'll give my humble vote to just "Showcase Everything You Create" – for me is shorter and more clear. The "You are" part reads a bit forced and vague.
The sub-headline could also be shorter, f.ex. "a place where your audience can connect with you through interactive widgets"
Disclaimer: I am not a marketer!
Other than that, the landing page looks good to me! Good luck!
Thanks for your feedback 🙂
What are your thoughts on this version:
Your Personal Page to:
Be Seen. Be Heard.
Be Creative. Be You.
Create a page where your audience can truly connect with your creativity through interactive Widgets.
I'm also no marketer by any means - figuring things out as I go. Really appreciate your input 🚀
or 🤔
Your Personal Page to:
Express and Monetize
Your Creativity
Create a page where your audience can truly connect with your creativity through interactive Widgets.