Hey Tyler! Nice work - looks really great! In terms of the messaging / my only quick note is that I'm always confused when people say "we" a lot but then also reference a number of times being the only person on the team.
From a client point of view for example it's good to know if other people in the team that would be taking over the working during holidays, sick days, when you get too busy etc or at least what happens. I know I've had to answer a number of those questions in the past even when I ran a studio with a team but it's even more important when services say turnarounds are one day (for example). But also for you because burnout happens a lot if you feel totally responsible all the time for one day responses and turnarounds (and I'm a big advocate of a three or four day work week haha so I always like seeing working days when turnarounds are a part of the value prop).
I know the we / I thing is quite tricky but I think given you've called out it's a team of one then it's maybe worth just sticking to I - or indeed switch everything to the façade of a team and not mention it's only one person (but in that case be prepared with some backup helpers!).
UI note: my bug bear is type case being different in buttons so I noticed for example you have Apply Here and Get Started (both capitalized) but View recent work (sentence case). Not important but ... designer eyes! Same with Apply Now vs Book a call.
P.S. Side note: I have absolutely no idea what the reference in " Let's get this 🍞 together" is but I read the bread emoji as "pain" (bread in french) and it made me smile because that kind of works in a weird way if thinking pain in english!
Hey Tyler! Nice work - looks really great! In terms of the messaging / my only quick note is that I'm always confused when people say "we" a lot but then also reference a number of times being the only person on the team.
From a client point of view for example it's good to know if other people in the team that would be taking over the working during holidays, sick days, when you get too busy etc or at least what happens. I know I've had to answer a number of those questions in the past even when I ran a studio with a team but it's even more important when services say turnarounds are one day (for example). But also for you because burnout happens a lot if you feel totally responsible all the time for one day responses and turnarounds (and I'm a big advocate of a three or four day work week haha so I always like seeing working days when turnarounds are a part of the value prop).
I know the we / I thing is quite tricky but I think given you've called out it's a team of one then it's maybe worth just sticking to I - or indeed switch everything to the façade of a team and not mention it's only one person (but in that case be prepared with some backup helpers!).
UI note: my bug bear is type case being different in buttons so I noticed for example you have Apply Here and Get Started (both capitalized) but View recent work (sentence case). Not important but ... designer eyes! Same with Apply Now vs Book a call.
P.S. Side note: I have absolutely no idea what the reference in " Let's get this 🍞 together" is but I read the bread emoji as "pain" (bread in french) and it made me smile because that kind of works in a weird way if thinking pain in english!