Awesome you're killing it, this is good copy.
Ways to improve:
- Test if your core headline works better with "Never open Dev Tools to check styles again" or "The fastest and easiest way to inspect and copy CSS"
- The social proof with all press mentions doesnt appear above the fold. Can you press things up so that it fits on the first page without scrolling?
- Can you add intermediary call to actions? Eg before "Discover how your favorite websites are styled by analysing CSS on the fly"
- Can you add a pitch on you and your story in the end, anything that makes it relatable? How you came across it, who you are, maybe that you are indie or young or from somewhere special
Thank you, William!
* Indeeed that's a great suggestion - I should try which headline works better.
* Not sure how to do that as I need to show the demo button code and the discount countdown + headlines which are big
* Sure! But this "Discover (...)" was already for the intermediary call. Do you have any ideas for more ctas?
Awesome you're killing it, this is good copy.
Ways to improve:
- Test if your core headline works better with "Never open Dev Tools to check styles again" or "The fastest and easiest way to inspect and copy CSS"
- The social proof with all press mentions doesnt appear above the fold. Can you press things up so that it fits on the first page without scrolling?
- Can you add intermediary call to actions? Eg before "Discover how your favorite websites are styled by analysing CSS on the fly"
- Can you add a pitch on you and your story in the end, anything that makes it relatable? How you came across it, who you are, maybe that you are indie or young or from somewhere special
Thank you, William!
* Indeeed that's a great suggestion - I should try which headline works better.
* Not sure how to do that as I need to show the demo button code and the discount countdown + headlines which are big
* Sure! But this "Discover (...)" was already for the intermediary call. Do you have any ideas for more ctas?
Thanks again!