I need help refining my portfolio page. Please roast.

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I've never built a portfolio, and this is my first time. I should have done it earlier, but I was afraid that I didn't have enough to show.

It is my dream to move to SF and build with other builders, and right now, Founders Inc. is accepting applications to get into their community https://f.inc/

Please help me, roast my portfolio page and help me improve it.

https://www.rostyslav.xyz/

Juan Alvarez · Accepted Answer

Shitposter and "like to talk to AI" doesn't sound super professional (what one would typically look for in freelance contractors).

Superstars can afford that "branding" (or whatever you want to call it), but most of us can't. I'd suggest a stronger bio outlining *why* anyone would contract you.

As for the projects page, it feels a bit cramped, and the stats page appears empty. 

Good luck!

Michael Sumner · Answer

@rostyslav use a professional tone and leadership tone and a hopeful tone whilst also working on curious and impactful projects. it's ok to have the young tone but with wisdom and commitment to a vision

Rostyslav Dzhohola · Answer

I don't really understand how you would write that tone?

Rostyslav Dzhohola · Answer

When you said the project page is a bit cramped, do you mean the spacing between projects or the spacing between project elements (like the description card)?

Juan Alvarez · Answer

I guess that spacing between more projects, but it's more a general feeling

Michael Sumner · Answer

Your website should come across as that of a confident, visionary leader who is passionate about innovative and meaningful work. You want to inspire trust and excitement in your visitors. And showing that you are both dynamic and grounded, young yet wise, and fully committed to making a difference.

Hope that helps

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