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Roast my current landing page so I can build a better one for PH

I'm getting ready for a Product Hunt launch and building a new landing page for the big day, would love some feedback on the current landing page to see what language works and what doesn't. Personally, I don't think the problem we are wanting to solve is clear and thus- makes it difficult to motivate users to want to sign up.

Let me know your thoughts,

entice.com

1 - Can you identify what problem Entice wants to solve?

2 - Is there a user-type you think would want this service (yourself, someone you know, etc.)

Plus any other ideas or critiques- 

Thanks! Roast away. 

Co-Founder @ Entice. Building startups and surfing waves.
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1 - Can you identify what problem Entice wants to solve?
I think it's similar to influenswer.com/ by @damon ?

2 - Is there a user-type you think would want this service (yourself, someone you know, etc.)
Probably some people looking to invest in Crypto/stock markets maybe?

It's my own POV, but I think your Landing Page is too vague. There are no examples, and it's not very clear how to signup as an 'expert' or as a 'customer'

Co-Founder @ Entice. Building startups and surfing waves.

Thanks @icesofty ! I would agree on the vagueness- our buyer persona is the white collar class but it's reading too broad at the moment.

Self-taught web dev, created IndieLog.com, Channel.so and more.

As Florian mentioned, the "professional network" is a too big name. Do you want to start it with a small niche, like a specific industry?

I would tell you it's hard to get those high-profile professionals/stars onboard. They already make lots of money, if they couldn't get the incentives from your platform, it would be hard to have them sticky.

But best of luck🙏 Hope you could find a niche to kick it off!

Co-Founder @ Entice. Building startups and surfing waves.

Thanks @damon !

Swift & Rails app crafter 🐮Creator of cows 🥐 Teambaker 🐋 Turtle whisperer 🏝 Working on too many side projects.

Some notes, unsorted:
* The logo is not retina-display
* On a 16" screen, your content is too small
* I'm not sure I understand. Do I need to create yet another social network profile? Does it mean I can only find customers from there? Or is your job to make it easy to get paid?
* How do you handle international taxes?
* For anything social, showing faces is important. I think it would be more powerful if you gave example of people who used entice for specific tasks with a verbatim
* What exactly do you make easy? For who? Compared to what? Is it the admin, finding customers, making sure you're paid, tracking your service, charging the right price…

Working on vokal.co

There is currently a lot of white space.
I would make the height of the first slide a bit smaller.
Maybe show a preview of the second slide, this is common with other SaaS websites (saaslandingpage.com/)
Added a screenshot with the edit I was talking about.

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