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Thijs

@thysmakes

🌳Building Homestead List. An app that lets people search for their dream home and get off grid.
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Looks a lot better already! I still think it's a bit to much text, but maybe that's personal preference. Intro video is definitely a nice idea. Keep it up!

Interesting, in my view it's not very much text ha!

I'd like to dig in a bit more if you don't mind: I suppose the view on the amount of text content depends on the purpose of it in your and my view - do you suggest very minimal text to give it more of a "straight to the point" kind of vibe or something else? From my perspective I'm trying to keep it a bit light while still establishing some authority with the customer, and be clear on exactly what they're getting. So it's not exactly a heavy sales page but also not a one-click everything.

Yes, I like the straightforward approach you have: Fixed-price, full-powered Laravel development. Keep that up I'd say.

Cool idea! Timezone might be an issue but i'm down.

I'm in the US, but my schedule is all over the place, I'm a workaholic, and I mostly live on Western Aus hours, so I'll be there all the time 😂 The cool thing about the one I suggested is that it's open 24/7 and people can hop in and out when they want.

  • I understand the inaccuracy of pricing. But add ball park USD pricing. I think it's a turn-off for people who cannot see the pricing plan immediately.
  • To "productize" further, add everything you offer in plans/tiers.
  • I see a lot of text and need to read a lot to know what problems you solve, maybe something more "bitesized". Also move "Who am I" and "Who are you" to another page, people tend to not care. They just want to pay you money for a problem you solve.
  • Seems like you have a bunch of experience, show people! Add testimonials or screenshots from previous work.
  • I think the simple design is effective and nice! Check for inspiration: www.designjoy.co/

Thanks for the feedback! Will definitely move the blocks around a bit.

To be clear, this is explicitly not the same model as DesignJoy. I think he's actually corrupted the "productized service" term a bit, because not all productized services are just subscriptions. See here, as I'm following Jonathan Stark's description: jonathanstark.com/fps

Under that definition, tiers/plans are not applicable. The offering as I'm exploring it is selling individual tasks directly, and that's what the offering list reflects.

  • I like how simple the page is
  • Check out your competition so you can figure out if you can actually get a chunk of the market: flatfile.com/ www.oneschema.co/
  • Get started CTA is not working on my machine; Mac OSX using Arc browser.
  • The copy is very clear, and I immediately understand the product.
  • Add testimonials as soon as people use your product
  • If you want to target mobile audience, make sure it's responsive.

Yes I do like the checklist inside a card too! The UX is really good. Do you think it can do anything better UX wise?

Nice, I use the same. Anything else feels overkill. Why would you not pay for it?

cause I'm cheap AF. 🤣 I already pay for Airtable so I would probably just use their kanban view if I couldn't use Trello for free.

Do you use the board feature in Notion? And if so, what do you enjoy more from Notion than from Trello?